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Hi Kieren, This is a very creative story, with lots of chocolate in it! If Chocky had a face made of cake what happened to him at the party? People usually eat cake at parties!
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Hi Kieren,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very creative story, with lots of chocolate in it!
If Chocky had a face made of cake what happened to him at the party? People usually eat cake at parties!