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Kia ora Kieren! I absolutely love your idea for a new kind of transport, a hoverboard has always sounded like so much fun. Your slogan is both catchy and informative, 'Want to fly? We're hovering to you!' is a clever use of words that tells the audience that you are promoting a hoverboard. The billboard you created is striking. With the green grass looking bright and lush against the black background. All I would suggest is that you enlarge the font to make sure it stands out to the reader. Good work getting both creates done to a high standard. Your Minecraft house uses simple shapes to create a well designed building. The stairs were an interesting feature. Nice work keeping up with your maths practise, I think you could start at chilli 3 and push yourself to work out some of those problems. Excellent mahi Kieren!
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Hi Kieren is Isabella here I like your Hover Bike it looks rely cool.
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Thanks for your feed back Isabella.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kieren! I absolutely love your idea for a new kind of transport, a hoverboard has always sounded like so much fun. Your slogan is both catchy and informative, 'Want to fly? We're hovering to you!' is a clever use of words that tells the audience that you are promoting a hoverboard. The billboard you created is striking. With the green grass looking bright and lush against the black background. All I would suggest is that you enlarge the font to make sure it stands out to the reader. Good work getting both creates done to a high standard. Your Minecraft house uses simple shapes to create a well designed building. The stairs were an interesting feature. Nice work keeping up with your maths practise, I think you could start at chilli 3 and push yourself to work out some of those problems. Excellent mahi Kieren!
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