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Thank you for another awesome week Kieren! You are such a positive learner every day, you make our meets flow with all the sharing and kindness you show the rest of our team. Your art looks well balanced as you colour effectively to represent our arawai. You have written an exciting story and your paragraphs are growing which is lovely to see. Remember to reread your work out loud and listen to where full stops might need to go instead of commas. Great work adding in you own ideas to our shared literacy work, I can see you have thought about each point of view. Your profile picture shows your awesome smile! You have set out your maths thinking clearly and worked through the money well with confidence. Maybe next week push yourself to do 1 more maths slide, excellent mahi Kieren!
Hey Kieren, It's me Pathey! I really enjoyed reading and observing your work. I really like how you wrote *Actually see the darkness* Most likely better than mine. Also, I like How you made the bridge / Pathway beside the river, I just made mine a little part of the river! and you on the other hand just made the whole bridge 1 / 3 the main Object on your Picture. Anyways hope you have a nice Weekend. Bye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
where is your question? and what did you enjoy but nice work
ReplyDeleteThank you for another awesome week Kieren! You are such a positive learner every day, you make our meets flow with all the sharing and kindness you show the rest of our team. Your art looks well balanced as you colour effectively to represent our arawai. You have written an exciting story and your paragraphs are growing which is lovely to see. Remember to reread your work out loud and listen to where full stops might need to go instead of commas. Great work adding in you own ideas to our shared literacy work, I can see you have thought about each point of view. Your profile picture shows your awesome smile! You have set out your maths thinking clearly and worked through the money well with confidence. Maybe next week push yourself to do 1 more maths slide, excellent mahi Kieren!
ReplyDeleteHey Kieren, It's me Pathey! I really enjoyed reading and observing your work. I really like how you wrote *Actually see the darkness* Most likely better than mine. Also, I like How you made the bridge / Pathway beside the river, I just made mine a little part of the river! and you on the other hand just made the whole bridge 1 / 3 the main Object on your Picture. Anyways hope you have a nice Weekend. Bye!
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