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Hello Kieren This is really good and I like you sloth and your scratch game but don't you have to do more then one create but overall this is really good
Kia ora Kieren. You extended yourself by completing an extra create. Well done e hoa. Doing the extras will definately benefit make you a better leader. Your new character, Sloth, is such a genius concept. How else do you slow down Sonic? Slow down the time! Genius. Your poem is also genius. You went the extra mile by making it rhyme. Very talented. I just wanted to tell you that I've enjoyed reading your posts during lockdown and I think you're well on your way to becoming a great leader. Haka strong. Waiata strong. Mana strong. All the best next year and make the most of it. Wishing you and your whanau a Meri Kirihimete. Stay safe.
Kia ora Kieren! Wow I absolutely adore your Sonic Boom character, it is well drawn by hand and has a lovely big smile. Your idea to make it's superpower to slow down time works perfectly with what a sloth is and how they move in nature, you really nailed the idea! You shared your ideas about you already knew about the Olympics, skateboarding and e-sports and answered the questions after you read the texts. Nice job completing the graph for maths, analysing how your family spends their day/week. It was awesome to see that big wedge of whanau time! You are breaking up larger numbers when solving multiplication problems, showing you use and understand place value with confidence. It has been an absolute pleasure having you in our ako whanau this year Kieren, you continue to show that you are self manager and lead others with your responsible nature. I look forward to seeing you next year!
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Hello Kieren This is really good and I like you sloth and your scratch game but don't you have to do more then one create but overall this is really good
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kieren. You extended yourself by completing an extra create. Well done e hoa. Doing the extras will definately benefit make you a better leader. Your new character, Sloth, is such a genius concept. How else do you slow down Sonic? Slow down the time! Genius. Your poem is also genius. You went the extra mile by making it rhyme. Very talented. I just wanted to tell you that I've enjoyed reading your posts during lockdown and I think you're well on your way to becoming a great leader. Haka strong. Waiata strong. Mana strong. All the best next year and make the most of it. Wishing you and your whanau a Meri Kirihimete. Stay safe.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Cruze and Ayushmaan Stay Safe
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kieren! Wow I absolutely adore your Sonic Boom character, it is well drawn by hand and has a lovely big smile. Your idea to make it's superpower to slow down time works perfectly with what a sloth is and how they move in nature, you really nailed the idea! You shared your ideas about you already knew about the Olympics, skateboarding and e-sports and answered the questions after you read the texts. Nice job completing the graph for maths, analysing how your family spends their day/week. It was awesome to see that big wedge of whanau time! You are breaking up larger numbers when solving multiplication problems, showing you use and understand place value with confidence. It has been an absolute pleasure having you in our ako whanau this year Kieren, you continue to show that you are self manager and lead others with your responsible nature. I look forward to seeing you next year!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ms Ghent for your awesome feedback.
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