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Excellent week of learning Kieren, thank you for being part of our Google Meets everyday. Your poem is jam packed with lots of examples of personification, e.g. 'screaming cicadas'. Your describing meant I could really feel like I was experiencing what you were saying. Your maths thinking is clear and well thought out, keep up the tino pai mahi!
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Great work Kieren.
ReplyDeleteExcellent week of learning Kieren, thank you for being part of our Google Meets everyday. Your poem is jam packed with lots of examples of personification, e.g. 'screaming cicadas'. Your describing meant I could really feel like I was experiencing what you were saying. Your maths thinking is clear and well thought out, keep up the tino pai mahi!
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