About Ultron
One day in new york city hero’s fighting villains but this time it was iron man vs ultron, one v one who will win tony stark made ultron and he was a good guy until ultron became evil because the avengers destroyed his body and then ultron used the internet to escape and then ultron built his body and then he will get his revenge ultron also made vision ultron used to be a mystery villain ultron is played by James Spader P1
About iron man
Stan Lee created Iron man and then iron man became in the avenger movies, it took Tony Stark years and years to build the iron man suit, Iron man is also built specialized suits for other environments like deep sea diving and space travel. Did you know that iron man's suit is real, did you also know that Tony Stark was based off of millionaire industrialist Howard Hughes. P2
Now the fight scene
They come face to face ultron hasn’t seen iron man since a long time and ultron shoots a massive beam at iron man but iron man flys away but ultron is still shooting the beam which is lasering buildings down that must cost 1000,000 ultron stop shooting the beam ok I will shoot plasma blast pew pew pew the plasma blasts are hitting buildings over ultron it’s my turn iron man shoots his unibeam wich hits ultron but it does go thru him it so it hits five building but ultro is dead but the whole now the whole town hates me thats so sad so how am i going to make the town not hate me anymore iron man wanted. P3
Good job Kieren i like how it was iron man vs ultron very good kieren
ReplyDeleteHi Kezzy,
ReplyDeleteI like how you introduced the two main characters and gave a brief insight into their background, for those who are not familiar with the their history, like for whaea hahaha jokes. My only advice is to drop in a few full stops every now and then and maybe a comma here and there. The sound effects were on point. Awesome work dude.
Thank you so much Cruze and Tiana
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