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Friday, September 17, 2021

Vege Man/also 150th post

 One day there was this supervillian who’s name was Vege man, but vege man was’t a normal bad guy he was a alien, vege man was a vegetarian and he didn’t eat meat, so one day he thought of a plan to make every one vegetarian. The next day the evil plan was created he called it vege three thousand, he just needs to find this purple cube so it can work forever. The next day vege man was exploring the galaxy and then he found it but there was people on the map, Vege man was flying around in giant space ship bigger than the island! Vege man started to abduct the cube but then it shrunk into the ground what is he going to do now.P1


Vege man thought of a plan to get the purple cube the mini people where fighting with guns and they where building every where and then there was this storm that killed people if they stay in it for a while. Vege mans plan was to abduct the map and try find the cube. First Vege man abducts the middle place called the spire, but the cube is not there then he abducts a place called slurpy swamp the cube is also not there and then he abducts a place called coral castle but the cube is still not there then the aliens found a letter that says kevin the cube is in corny complex so vege man and the aliens abduct corny complex but the some thing happens P2


The thing that happend was there where bomb under corny complex the alein ship exploded and now there are a million kevin the cubes around To be continued.


2 comments:

  1. The suspense is real... Awesome story telling. Your writing has improved dramatically from last week with the added punctuations. The first paragraph was especially impressive. Ka pai Kezzy. So proud of you e hoa.

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