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Kia ora Kieren! So good to see that you got your brother opinions on the borders and Covid. Also Dad got to test out his music skills! Your paper plane looked sleek and it worked quite well considering your were in a room. Maybe outside it could've fly longer. Thank you for continuing to share your ideas during our Meets, it good to for us to stay connected and collaborate. Your writing confidence is growing and you continue to paragraph well. Remember to reread your writing out loud, your 1st paragraph needs bit of editing. Overall a fantastic effort!
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Kia ora Kieren! So good to see that you got your brother opinions on the borders and Covid. Also Dad got to test out his music skills! Your paper plane looked sleek and it worked quite well considering your were in a room. Maybe outside it could've fly longer. Thank you for continuing to share your ideas during our Meets, it good to for us to stay connected and collaborate. Your writing confidence is growing and you continue to paragraph well. Remember to reread your writing out loud, your 1st paragraph needs bit of editing. Overall a fantastic effort!
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